Monday 4 November 2013

I Heard A Whisper But No One Was There

Bah boom bah boom bah boom, foot steps trampled down the gravel foot path with their heavy boots with shovels ready to swing back at all the cow pat that came flying at them. These three men were the bosses of the farm, and every once and a while they would all song I’m a farmer and I grow it, they did the little bogie then back to work. This farm was passed down from generation to generation so this farm is quite old but on this farm there are sometimes weird noises but they only happen once a century.

One day on a warm summers morning the three men named, Healy, Kealy and Calvin all heard a weird sound it was like a whisper. “What was that”, Healy whispered to Kealy. “I don’t know”, answered Kealy then Calvin said, “That must be someone but who” “you mean what was whispering look”, Healy said. Then they all looked at what Healy was pointing at, he was pointing at a long thin animal with long red streamy fur it was a fox. But did they know that for certain, maybe they were mistaken?

The men carried on doing their normal jobs but always remembered that fox and kept a close eye on that little animal. Finally the next morning the fox was gone then the men raced to the spot where they last sare the fox he was gone! Searching every where the farmers still had no hope finding that little guy. What’s that sound, the men heard it again they went to where they heard the sound and guess who was there that long fox with the streamy red flowing fur. But they still haven’t figured out who was whispering then the sound was right there the FOX was whispering!

What the fox wanted is he wanted to have a party with the whole farm including the men. So that night the whole farm went into the barn and sang songs and also danced but the most exciting song that everyone loved was from the fox and this is how it goes. Dog goes woof, Cat goes meow, Bird goes tweet and mouse goes squeak, but there’s a sound that no one knows what does the fox say, ning ning ning ning ning ning ning ning ning ning ning ning ning what the fox say wha pa pa pa pa pa pow what does the fox say.
Then the song finished and that was the end of the show and the end of the story.

Good bye!!!

2 comments:

  1. HI Jordan,
    I really like how you use strong and juicy word.I like it when your sentences start with a strong beginning.

    From Cyrus

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  2. Hello Jordan!
    My name is Chastity Westry. I am in student in EDM 310 at the University of South Alabama. I really enjoyed reading your story. I think you were very creative with your characters. My favorite part of your story is when the fox wanted the farmers to have a party with him. Jordan, you did a great job!
    Keep blogging:)

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