Today is the first day of the year five and six camp. Our first event is Kayaking I am really excited but I wanted to do it later on in the day but at least we get to do it. So there we were traveling to our destination we just left the school grounds and we are traveling to the reserve.
When we reached the park to get changed into our togs the doors were locked then we saw the man with the key he was just about to leave! Then with a loud voice Mrs Jacobson asked, “May you please open the door so we can get changed”. The man agreed to open the door. When all the boys finished getting changed the girls were still in the changing rooms not even getting changed until about one minute later.
Where on the beach now we are about to go kayaking Mr Burt told us how to paddle and how to get in the boat. We finished our kayaking now it’s time for a swim. We finished our swim it was fun but now it’s time go back to school and have fun catch you later.
Hello Jordan thank you for posting your story about kayaking I really like the part when you said catch fun later.I really think that you have achieved your WALT because you have used correct punctuation.To improve your story you can say what you wanted to do when you were on the kayak and if you went with a friend or if you went by yourself.How did you fell when you started to row.From Gerry
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