Today at Eden Park I am here to support the PT England Rip pa Rugby team against all of the other winners of each School in Auckland. It is going to be a tough job to do because they are going up against Holy Cross Holy Cross is a very hard school to beat. Sadly we lost against them and onto our next game we go. It’s was also my first time at Eden Park everyone else had been to Eden Park before except for me so it was very exciting for me.
Our second game came it was sort of a close score PT England School got five points North land got two points. Few that was a
close one. I’m glad they didn’t lose that game because if they did they would be further away from victory.
The third and final game but this game is different than the others this one is in the actual stadium. Wow the stadium is ginormous I wonder how big a football field is compared to this amazing field. The games have started PT England are winning Tame slips and slides and falls over but gets back up again and again another try goes down. The horn blew PT England won that game but came third place at least they gave it their best shot.
We came home with smiles on our faces from check to check woo.
Wow Jordan,
ReplyDeleteThat was cool writing you did I know how it feels because it has happened to me when I play Rip pa rugby tow times and we lost for all girls but the second time we went and lost and that was the term you were in any way KEEP IT UP
Hi Jordan,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoy reading all about your rip pa rugby it was sad when you lost but keep it up.
from Cyrus
It was a great day wasn't it. You have some good sentences here Jordan but your ideas are a bit out of order. Your first paragraph has two ideas in it because you introduce the recount and also talk about the first game. Two ideas here. Remember one idea in a paragraph.
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