This is my writing from the test which I wrote in 40
minutes without editing.
Suddenly things started disappearing first the tables then the desks luckily I caught my Net book just before it crashed into smithereens . I wonder what shale go missing next.Guess what it was the Library bang all the books started tumbling down. There must be a mystery in our hands?
Just as I turned to tell Ron about all of this chaos I only saw the wall Ron must have disappeared!!!
I will do a proper finished job next time.
Oh my gosh... can't believe you left me in suspense like that - when will I get to hear what happens next? Hope it's soon.
ReplyDeleteWhat an exciting mystery.
Love mum
FANTASTIC story son, very gripping. What happened to all the stuff? Where did Ron go? Will Ron come back? Does his parent know he's missing? What happens next, tell me tell me.....love Dad
ReplyDeletelove it Jordan! excellent use of vocabulary and no editing now thats just talent right there! and yes what did happen to Ron?? poor Ron!
ReplyDeleteAmazing job jordon.I hope you get a high mark.
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